Achoo
- cdavid508
- Aug 16, 2022
- 1 min read
About the haiku. Is it structured so because it’s hard to express oneself in fewer words? Let me present abbreviated haiku: 5 7 5 goes to 3 5 3:
You loved me
Until he blew in
Winter storm
Jeremy
Would you like to go
Rake some leaves
You bastard
She screamed in my face
Stormy spring
Or 1 3 1:
Once
Fire now you’re
Ice
Some
Relish the
Snow
why not 0 2 0:
silence
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